Barcode. Fantastic. I could criticize, not the story but the typos,
but then Ive never had anything published anywhere so Im not going
to. The story itself was nicely paced, the setting was almost
familiar but had a few distinctive aspects which made it both unique
and original [like the description of the Thames], the characters
were interesting enough that you, that is I, didnt mind them
continually popping back into the story, and the bit about Jon being
a coder [sorry to anyone who still hasnt read that far] would have
been obvious if Id thought about it but I didnt so it came as a
pleasant twist. Crazy Horse's last comment was a rather bizarre way
of ending but at least it leaves it open for a sequel if you feel
like it. So then, Kudos Jonny.
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