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IMHO - Barcode


Barcode. Fantastic. I could criticize, not the story but the typos, but then Ive never had anything published anywhere so Im not going to. The story itself was nicely paced, the setting was almost familiar but had a few distinctive aspects which made it both unique and original [like the description of the Thames], the characters were interesting enough that you, that is I, didnt mind them continually popping back into the story, and the bit about Jon being a coder [sorry to anyone who still hasnt read that far] would have been obvious if Id thought about it but I didnt so it came as a pleasant twist. Crazy Horse's last comment was a rather bizarre way of ending but at least it leaves it open for a sequel if you feel like it. So then, Kudos Jonny.